Although I already had an enviable job prior to this, my dream of becoming a pilot led me here. I believe that to become a pilot is every young man's dream, and so, to meet the challenge I have, for example, reduced my weight by 15 kilograms.
Yes, I have my sight set on Florida. I am ready.

我把 “减掉了15公斤脂肪” 译为

reduced my weight by 15 kilograms
我觉得还是不翻译“脂肪” 比较含蓄点。
我现在的目标是佛罗里达 =
I have my sight set on Florida
我的翻译
显示一个“雄心勃勃”,“不到黄河心不死” 的人。
这是我自己的翻译,地道,雅致,语法正确。


