嗯,好的刚刚看了看,那篇有好多语法错误,你要抄就抄这篇吧
那就一字一句给你翻了

On
May
3rd,our
school
conduct
an
outing
在五月3日,我们学校组织了一次郊游
.We
went
to
HongXing
farm
我们去了红星农场
Many
people standed
there
to
welcome
for
us
许多人站在那里欢迎我们
They
looked
friendly
and
kind.
他们看起来非常友好
A
handsome
uncle
let
us
to
visit.
一个英俊的叔叔请我们去参观
We
're
very
excite
and
happy.
我们当时既激动又开心
When
the
visit
was

over,it's
12
o'clock.
当参观结束时,已经中午12点了
We
had
a
lunch
我们吃了午饭。
Lunch
was
over,Belly
and
Sarah
danced
with
video.
当午饭结束后,Belly
和
Sarah
和着电视节目跳舞
Davie
and
Frank
sang
David
和Frank
在唱歌
Sophia
and
I
played
cards.It
was very
interesting
Sophia
和我玩了纸牌,那真的非常有趣
At
17
o'clock,we
leaved
HongXing
farm,and
then
we
cameback
home

to did
our
homework.
在下午5点,我们离开了红星农场,
然后我们回了家去做我们的作业


